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old wolfgirl OC's turned lesbian/bisexual

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I wanted to practice drawing two people kissing and I didn't know which characters to use. So I went back to my old ones and used those. 

critique would be very much appreciated
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hmmm well I would call it pretty good if this was your first try, but could be better
Idk where specifically that you wanted the critique for? proportions? Coloring? the kissing scene? well, let's try the latter

I'll say that the red-shirted wolf girl done most of the visual for "kissing" here. What I meant is that I don't see the white/blue hair wolf girl's lips? you should draw both character lips actually touching each other next time. I know lots of anime/manga kissing scenes are drawn this way for decades, but that didn't really work with me
Also you should consider their lips placement next time. The last one looked like the red-shirted wolf girl sucked her partner cheek instead
oh you forgot to draw doggie ears for the white/blue haired wolf girl on the first pic

did that do it?
peace out